Romance भंवर (पूर्ण)

[hotaks]

Kya kare .. chaukayenge nahi to log agla update magna to dur comment tak nasib na hone dete hain .. isliye kosis karta hun ki sab ko anth tak chunka hi dum

Nandni ki entry toxic hai .. aage to pyara moment milne wala hai.. keep enjoying

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[hotaks]

:roflol: .. jyada natak karega to klpd hi hoga na ... Turant mudna chahiye tha ghonchu ko :dazed:.. kunjal ki itni detailed discription.. itna to maine b na socha tha :lol:.. aap ke dhyan dilwane ka shukriya..

Filhaal batin me hai abhi kunjal ka chepter use india lautkar dekhte hain filhaal to mai engagement me busy hun .. karwa du nahi to kahin koi bich ne na aa jaye

 

[hotaks]

Are are are ... Aisa na kahiye .. matlab young age ke sath ghume aur log use sidha gf bf kahne lage to .. use hum narrow minded kahte hain.. kewal ghumne se hi gf bf bana jata hai kya.. dost ya kewal pahchan wale nahi ho sakte ...

Nandni aur Sinha ji ko sath dikhane kya lag gaya .. sab reader bechare Apasyu aur Aimee ko to alag hi tarah se alag karne par lage huye hain ..

Baksh dijiye madam ji .. warna dono ke suside ka ilzam aa jane hain ... BTW sawal mujhe khud majboori me dena para.. history ke update aa kar bit gaye aur mere reader hain ki sawal hi na puch tahe... Ise aap ek majboor writer ka term de sakte hain

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[hotaks]

Isi ka naam to jindgi hai indarjeet ji ... Mauke hasne ke kitne kam kyon na ho.. gum ke badal kitne ghane kyun na ho.. jindadil insan .. hasne aur jine ke bahane nikal hi lete hain ...

 

[hotaks]

Megha ke naam par bade hi khush ho rahe .. doc babu baat kya hai ..

Baki ye ek open story hai jahan suspence ke naam par kaddu kuch na milega... Yahan kewal aanewala situation hi suspence hi rahega .. jahan hone wali ghatna ke liye jigyasa banna hai .. dekhte hain kitna safal hoga hun .. ab sab ke riste b lagbhag sabke samne clear kar chuka hun .. so :cheers: and enjoy story without suspence ..

:welcome1: doc babu ..

 

[hotaks]

Haan kah sakte hain kimat to chukani par hi jati hai.. dekhiye yahan apne raah me kaun kimat chukata hai aur kitna .. ummid hai ab kahani me koi suspence na bacha hoga .. ab hum story ke flow aur current situation ko enjoy karte huye badhenge :declare:

 

[hotaks]

Chi chi chi ... Break up ki atkalen laga rahe ... Aisa na kari ... Baki kya hona hai wo to future hai... Dekhte hain kaisa nasib hai dono ka

Rg ladke kya hua .. roye to nahi na update padh kar.. itne emotional comment

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[hotaks]

Kya baat hai... Lovely comment Gunjan hi .. that's awesome.. padhkar hi muskurane laga... Update aur writer ko itna sarahne ke liye aap ka shukriya ...

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[hotaks]

Chain se jina hai to jag jao.. ye nahi suna kya ... Khair nahi suni to b koi baat na hai... Sachi ko chain se sulane ke liye Apasyu aur Aimee dono use jagayenge... Aur aap ne jyada imli imli ki to wo agli I'd crazy boy ke badle crazy naina ki I'd se aayegi ... Fir soch lena

Ju narrow minded .. dono adher umr ke log friends hain like Nischal and Nandni .. halanki like to nahi hai hain .. aur na hi unke dosti ke 200th hisse me honge lekin unke jaise hi ye b dist hai .. baat khatam :declare:

 

[hotaks]

Mujhe kah raha tha ..

Inke bhi love scene par mere ander ki bhawana to Nandu aur nischal jaisa banana hai inhe .. choice is yours .. jaise aap yahan ki choice karengi waisa dono hi kahaniyon ke kirdaron ke riste bana dunga

Hahaha .. rg bhi kabhi kabhi acha hi likhta hai.. maine hi kabhi dhyan nahi diya .. nice post rg