Romance भंवर (पूर्ण)

[hotaks]

Big fannnnnn .. shreloc Holmes ki copy hai na ek is story me ... Wo hai adernelin injection jo wo apne kutte ko lagata hai.. usi injection ko shurwat me maine diya hai...

Baki fight scene me .. not a single chance jo thoda bhi mel kha jaye .. wahan fight pridiction par based tha.. ek purvanuman... aur wahan ke fight scens itne explain nahi the bus target aur nishana tha..

Haan agar body par target karne ke hisab se kah rahe ho to ye writing hai yahan to batana parega na kahan maarne ke liye target kiya gaya tha .. baki koi Samanta ho to jaroor bataeye ... I am despirate to know doc babu .. kyonki meri fav movie hai .. dekhun to mera achet dimag wahan se kaun scene chura liya :dwarf:

 

[hotaks]

Hahaha .. 40-50k wali fight ladwata to hero ke sath kahani ki bhi izzat chali jati .. yahan chhoti si baat carore se shuru hoti hai ... Dusri story me yaad dilana .. one inch punch istamal karunga wahan

Chalo fight se kisi ko apatti nahi hui wahi bahut hai

:thanks: a lot ... Kahani ke sath bane rahen .. aur apni khatti-mithi pratikriya dete rahen :hug:

 

[hotaks]

Aap ho kiske side chintu bhai .. :hehe: matlab dushman team ki ekta toot rahi hai aur aap jo hain bus unhe ekta ka path padha rahen .. aisa to nahi Apasyu ka raaj kholne wale ho aap

:thanks: a lot ... Kahani ke sath bane rahen .. aur apni khatti-mithi pratikriya dete rahen :hug:

 

[hotaks]

Bus aap ke bare me hi sochkar to pura scene likha warna kuch jale log jaise ki rgcrazyboy Naina ke liye thode na main ye pura scene likh sakta tha.. ju to apne humdum humsafar humrahi humwatan humnava aur hum shayad khatam ho gaye aur jo rah gaye wo sab hai ..

:thanks: a lot ... Kahani ke sath bane rahen .. aur apni khatti-mithi pratikriya dete rahen :hug:

 

[hotaks]

Pratidwandi se hi to fighter ke skill ka andaza lagta hai joxob ko dikhana to tha hi .. tujhe bus maza aana chahiye baki apna pura paisa wasool hai.. wo kya hai pirit logon ka hum khus khyal rakhte hain aur aaj kal tu ghar ka pirit hui gawa re :bawl:

:thanks: a lot ... Kahani ke sath bane rahen .. aur apni khatti-mithi pratikriya dete rahen :hug:

 

[hotaks]

Mujhe laga kisi ne nahi likha lekin aap ne highlight kar hi diya "20 din ka bed rest".. ab itni badi fight thi to uske parinam bhi to bhugtne hinege... Aur thik hone wali wo ninja technique Apasyu india me hi bhul aaya hai

Ji bilkul .. aaj to sawre main aage dikha raha hun .. bus kewal aap ke comment se prabhawit hokar...

:thanks: a lot ... Kahani ke sath bane rahen .. aur apni khatti-mithi pratikriya dete rahen :hug:

 

[hotaks]

Kya baat hai .. maza aa gaya padh kar .. likhne me thodi masskat hui par parinam padhkar dil khush ho gaya...

:thanks: a lot ... Kahani ke sath bane rahen .. aur apni khatti-mithi pratikriya dete rahen :hug:

 

[hotaks]

Ek update par comment dene ke 24 ghantey baad waiting diya kar .. tera bus chale to update post main karun aur 5 min baad waiting likh dega.. uffff itna lalach

 

[hotaks]

Hahaha .. eklauti yahi miss hai popcorn liye baithi .. real action lover.. tootengi tootegi haddiyan b tootengi .. bus dil tham kar baithiye

Guruji ko kuch nahi kahne ka .. uspar jo duniya me na ho .. bad manner .. waise fight master JK hai wo hai godfather in sab matter ka .. use bol sakti hain

Aadhe par aise reaction waise update aane se pahle kisi Naina naam ki miss ne kaha tha South ki fight hogi .. fight kis hisab ki thi jab aaya tab batana bhool gayi :sigh2:

 

[hotaks]

Is wale me sare record tootenge .. 100k carore ki baat hogi .. haan par main kisi ko bharat ka sabse raish khandano me se ek nahi bata raha ..

Bus khali jit gaya .. uspar lal face .. jhute muh badhai bhi to deti jati

:thanks: a lot ... Kahani ke sath bane rahen .. aur apni khatti-mithi pratikriya dete rahen :hug: