Romance भंवर (पूर्ण)

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:doh: matlab ek aur reader :banghead:

Aka bhai maine pahle hi dono ka rista clear kar diya tha.. Maiko mera update escape karke padhte ho .. janta jawab mangti hai

Hahaha .. girls fight .. koi na aap ke is anubahw ko aur romanchit karne ke liye desi style girl fight ka pakka arrangement kiya jayega ..

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[hotaks]

Mujhe aaj bhi story ke shurwat ka wo comment yaad hai jab crazy boy ko gali diya ja raha tha .. tab tumne hi likha tha na ki ye bus badla lene ke liye special appearance likha gaya hai ... Aur aaj yahan likh rahe pahle se sab pata tha ..

Thik se decide kar lo ki wo sahi tha ya ye sahi

 

[hotaks]

Thanks a lot James Leon ji .. kya baat hai .. bare dino baad comment.. itna bhi chhip kar update na padhiye ki writer reader ko na dekh kar apne update bhi chhipa chhipa kar dena sikb jaye

 

[hotaks]

Jhoota jhoota .. jhoota .. kitni baar to comment me roye the ki sachi ke bare me koi sochta nahi .. wo bhi likhne ke style me serious concern tha ... Khaie chhodo biti baten ye to party ka waqt hai... Now u happy na .. :

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[hotaks]

Megha abhi aage b aayegi .. I hope u will really love it ... Khair .. sachi ko uljhaha nahi gaya hai is bar suljha diya gaya hai.. baki aage to aap dekh hi rahe hain aur hume bhi aise hi batate rahiyega

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[hotaks]

.. aisa jadu ke karan aaya tha update ... :esc: matlab mere update ke shabd kisi ne badal diye kya :?:

Yahan bhi nothing personal .. ye chal kya raha tha ..

Masoom to mujh se jyada koi na .. kisi ne meri arji suni hai kya :?:

 

[hotaks]

Hahaha .. koi na ab Apasyu ne itna bada jhatka diya tha.. itna to scene dalna to banta hai na aman bhai .. waise dosti hui to ye nahi ki kuch nahi hoga .. bus jo bhi hoga wo dostana hoga

 

[hotaks]

Aage to pura ka pura masti ka pitara hai .. action ka romance me tadke ke bich dosti ki bemisal kahani .. bus aise hi rai dete rahiye

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.. jyada pasand aa gaya ho unknown girl aur carzy boy ka romance to kahiye .. main kisi bhi tarah ke romance likhne se piche nahi likhne wala.. bus dobara se mujhe movie "Blue is the warmest colour" .. 4-5 bar aur dekhna padega

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[hotaks]

Aage kya hoga .. raja rani mar gaye aur khatam kahani .. isliye filhal engagement par hi concentrate karte hain

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