Romance भंवर (पूर्ण)

[hotaks]

Piche itna bada itihas tha wo na dikha.. khali tumhe parchhayi dikhi .. ab isme main kuch nahi kar sakta re baba .. u need to be treatment as soon as possible :lol:

Jio ka network room me nahi rahta .. jaldi se reply khatam ho jaye isliye chhat par baith kar reply kar raha hun .. ek hath se type karta hun to dusre hath se machhar mar raha .. ye sale machar kat kat fula rahe hain .. aur jawab bhi dena par raha hai to aise comment jisme reader ka dimag kahin lagta hai chhut gaya tha likhte waqt ...

Likhna kuch na hai baten banwa lo kewwal.... Kya suspence laga wo batao .. khali suspence suspence likhne se mai kaise samjhun ki kaun sa suspence tumhare dimag me chal raha hai..

Ab maine kahan se lakar kahan jod di story ... O bhai o story to mere hisab se kahin par bhi toda ya joda na hai .. aur na hi kuch bhi naya utha kar laya hun .. ab khali chillaoge ya bataoge bhi ki kis baat ko lekar aisa kah rahe .. :slap:

Ya kuch na mil raha hai kahne to ise Vidhan sabha banane ki kosis kar rahe :hehe:

 

[hotaks]

... Samjh gaya .. us ore bhi apne jaisa haal hai aisa kyun lagne laga hai mujhe .. rahne do mere aashu na pocho ..... Main solution dhundhne nikla hun sahara nahi

 

[hotaks]

Haan ek tough charecter ka chitran kiya tha maine bhi.. kafi muskil tha total charecterization .. expressions aur chijon ko dekhne ke najariye ko darshana... Hopefully u can justify the emotionless emotions

 

[hotaks]

:yesss: aman bhai .. apne ghar ki hi bachi hai.. aakhir kaise na bhai sahara dega.. waise kunjal pasand aa rahi ho to batao .. ek susil ladka mai dhundh raha hun .. aur 4-5 namon par vichar chal raha hai

 

[hotaks]

Abhi to baba Apasyu ke pravachan ka daud shuru hi hua hai.. abhi kayi nasihat milne wale hain .. bahrhaal enjoy the story aur mujhe bhi batate rahiyega...

:thanks: for such a tremendous support

 

[hotaks]

Ju r late sir .. tukdon me bata kar khatam bhi kar diya flash back ... Waise aap kah hi rahe hain to ek baar aur flash back shuru kar denge .. apna kya jata hai

 

[hotaks]

quick action jyada pasand hai mujhe .. wo kya hai na action ke liye lamba chauda update thoda ubau ho jata hai .. action aur romance se bharpur kahani ka maza lijiye

:thanks: for such a tremendous support

 

[hotaks]

Wah wah kya line likhi hai ... Dard me hai past aur past me hai dard :applause: :applause: .. je line maine dimag me download kar li hai .. aaj se meri hui ..

Wo kya hai na jab mai inki kismat likh raha tha fir kisi bhi tarah ke raham dikhane ke mood me nahi tha .. waise maine update emotional nahi kiye warna .. sab Aimee ka naam likh rahe hote ... Sabne dur se dekha tha .. lekin uske aakhon ke aage sab kuch ho raha tha ...

Bahut se chawwani chhap hai .. sab ko puri saja di jayegi .. tension nakko re baba .. aur ye aakhri line me kya ho gaya tujhe .. pasand na aaya kya .. koi aur line likhun

 

[hotaks]

Hahaha... Pata is ladke ka kya hi main karun .. aap hi samjhao ki aise khubsurat aur pyari ladki se itna attitude nahi dikhate .. meri to sun na raha .. shayad aap ki sun le ..

Baki nandni ko to apmanit kiya ja raha tha ab wo ghar aaye logon ko kuch bol to nahi sakti thi isliye gussa dono bhai par hi utar di

:thanks: for such a tremendous support

 

[hotaks]

Bahut tough saja hoti hai aman bhai .. ye duniya ki sabse tough saja hoti hai... Dushmani kar le... Dur ho jaye.. nafrat karte rahe.. lekin jiske itne close ho uske liye emotionless hona... Bahut badi saza hoti hai... Baharhal .. ummid hai jaise jaise kahani aage badh rahi hogi aap ko story me ruchi jaag rahi hogi ..

:thanks: for such a tremendous support