Romance भंवर (पूर्ण)

[hotaks]

maine kahan kab roka hai na batane se ... melody khao khud jaan jao.. aage sab pahle se likha hai milu saarrrrrrrrrrrrrr .. ab ju slow chal rahe to meri koi galti hai kya .. batao ... naam yaad karna :idea: ... ratta maar lo bachpan ki tarah .. A se anar aa se aam ..

itne kam se mera kya hoga .. do char aur funny likh kar jate milu .. ye to abhi tak mera gila b gala na hua itne se comment se .. 100-150 aur comment fek kar marne ka tab kuch kuch santusthi milegi ... jald lautne ki kosis karna ...

:thanks: for such a beautiful comment ...

 

[hotaks]

:welcome1: aman rathore ji ...

ji shukriya aap ko aagaz pasand aaya ... ummid hai kahani ke anth tak aap mere sath chalenge aur ajnnam tak pahunchakar hi dum lenge .. :thanks: a lot

:thanks: for such a beautiful comment ...

 

[hotaks]

.... ... bindas bhai i m feeling myself proud .. wo aaj mujeh dil ko sukkon mil gaya us din ke counter reply ka ... "itne se comment par itna bada reply ..... aakhir kaar aap majboor hokar 5 line likh hi diye ... koi nahi agar meri baten taunt lag rahi ho to kahin kone me ja kar char gali de dena ...

aur haan ... :thanks: for such a beautiful comment ...

 

[hotaks]

khair joke a part... but thanks a lot jo apne kahani ko itna visualized kiya ... main to bus purani kuch sanskriti ko deikha raha tha jo shayad wakai vilupt hi ho gayi hai khaskar north Idian me .. haan south me ab bhi kayi asthano par gurukul hai aur uski garima yathawat hai ... kintu aur kitne dino tak yathawat rahegi usme sandeh hai ... baki padhte rahiye aur comment ke madhyam se apne vichar dete rahiye ..

smile plz

 

[hotaks]

ye writer hi thoda nautankibaz hai to charecters bhi waise hi hinge Aman .. shukriya aap ke is samiksha ke liye ..

:thanks: for such a beautiful comment ...

 

[hotaks]

kya kahte hain .. tang to main bhi aa gaya hun aarva se lekin kya karun bhai hai .. koi aur charecter itna badha deta to ab tak usse udda chuka hota

:thanks: for such a beautiful comment ...

 

[hotaks]

ab daregi nahi harkaten hi aisi ho to .. lekin kiski harkat wo shayad aap ko aage pata chal jaye ... filhaal to itna hi jaldi se aap current tak pahunche taki sath sath chalenge ...

:thanks: for such a beautiful comment ...

 

[hotaks]

:lol: .. ap ne bhi wo kuta aur scoty ki kahani suni .. koi na iska counter bhi milega .. dar bhagane ka ek aur upay .. aap aage padhiye wahin raste me thodi dur aage hi likha hai ..

:thanks: for such a beautiful comment ...

 

[hotaks]

haan suspence aur thrill likhen ki kosis hai yahan par .. dekhte hain aap ko ye suspence aur thrill kaisa lagta hai ... baki aage dekhiyega to mujhe bhi batate rahen

:thanks: for such a beautiful comment ...

 

[hotaks]

.. hahaha .. life is full of surprise ... aur wahi sachi ko bhi mila ... she just thought ki ladke ko ek baar hans kar bol do to kaam ho jayega ..

:thanks: for such a beautiful comment ...